Mogay Ryt

Hey manager! Nice speech! You really should write comedy strips, lots of people will be in tears and stitches. Though I must admit, I was a bit dissapointed. Your title ...

Hey you! Rather unique poetry, quite dramatic I must say :)!!! I agree with you about what you said about your Title maybe something like 'Addicted to her' or 'Intoxicated' ...

Hi ya, Nice story. Trust me, you don't need to make any excuses for the romantic part of the story, the undertones are quite noticeable besides your just beginning right? ...

Before I read this I read the comments and it was like everyone was just getting vicious. Chill out!!!...seriously :) Besides its people that write Hallmark cards anyways so its ...

Hi Sana! Welcome to YWS!!! I noticed your new here, so I decided to review your work :). Here goes... First of all, your title is a representative of your ...

Hi Lia, really nice work. Since you decided to try writing short stories, I hope you continue. Your writing holds so much substance, its amazing to think of what you'll ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS. Also congratulations on being the first writer on YWS :) to make me cry. Your writing blew me away. It wasn't just a good read, it ...

"Applause" (I actually clapped!!!) If you don't win this thing, the judges are mad!!! I absolutely loved reading this. I'm totally inspired to go and write something really amazing. My ...

First of all, if anyone says great writers can only write one kind of thing, its a hot lie!!! For your first poem, you did better than awesome. I don't ...

I think you have fabulous talent so if you had any doubts, by all means knock them out. Your work is great, rough on the edges but great. It was ...

Will you please write a novel and let me know when its out so I can get it and make it a part of my collection? :D Your writing is ...

I'm glad I'm over 13!!!:D You definitely have magic fingers, if this is your beginning with poetry I cant wait to see the end. Your work is really good. please ...

This is what I call small but mighty! Totally thought provoking. I was particularly pleasantly surprised by the fact that it didn't have any unnecessary dreaminess. Sometimes poems are like ...

First I most commend your humility. I'm very impressed. In writing, I've learnt that there is one thing to spin a story there is another thing to narrate yours. Reading ...

My question is who won't like it? I'm totally inspired. I don't know how you do it but you did it very well. I think your really talented. Well done! ...